Month: February 2015

A much better thing to do would be to re-draft your work, showing that you have acted upon your targets.  I will show you how to do this in class.

Annie was on his way to her home on a stormy night when she heard something. She thought it was a cat but it looked bigger than that. She ran but it was worthless since the thing was faster. All of a sudden, the thing got in front of her. It was a man wearing a hood. He took it of. The man wasn’t hear to attack but hear to help. He told her his name was Timothy. She was taken home and said thanks. Ever since this peculiar meeting, both Annie and Timothy have been friends for a very long time.

Rashid has forgot how to tell stories so he has left the town of G to the town of K. Haroun meets a bus driver called Mr Butt who takes them to the valley of k. The way they had to do was to drive during sunset so they can see how beautiful the valley is. At the destination (during the night) they meet Mr Buttoo and takes them into a splended house.

“His papa stories won’t fly of.”

I believe this means that Rashid’s stories will not fade in the valley of k.