Assassin’s Creed: Destiny

In the small town of Cubic City, I, Jay Morales, am it’s assassin and protector from the evil Templar but people know them as the inventing company known as Abstergo. I have been fighting them as an assassin with generations of assassins by my side. A few months ago, I came to meet my long lost brothers, Alex and Tyler Morales, but Tyler betrayed us and was actually a Templar spy. After training Alex, he was ready to become an assassin and he helped me and the other assassin teams in the fight through the war. To be able to win the war, we needed to find the pieces of Eden. We have already found some and need to retrieve the Shrout from the Templar’s but we needed one more, The Key of Eden. When we have retrieved the piece, then we would be able to stop the Templar’s at their path. My team called A team are known as Tray, Troy and Jax, three of my best assassins and best friends.

 

We had just got back from getting back to base with my brother, Alex, to celebrate his achievement on becoming an assassin but then General Desmond Miles told A team to go on a mission to retrieve the Shrout, the coat of Eden, from a Templar base in England, London. Finally, the day we get the penultimate Piece of Eden. Once my team found out about the good news, we got into gear very fast.

We had just sky dived to the porch of Big Ben. The dive was exhilarating like a birds first flight. We were told our rondavo point to meet was in the Thames Borough on Waterloo bridge where the Shrout was transferred from France to a groups of criminal Templar team called the Blighters. The weird thing is that their leader, Cromwell Stareg, was expecting us. He must be dumber the his great grandfather in which Eve and Jacob Fry, the Twin Assassins of London, had assassinated during the Victorian times. But this was too easy. Even though, this was our last time we could get the Shrout so we secretly assassinated all the remaining Blighters and went for the leader. We have done it and have got the Shrout but something tells me that the Templar’s are up to something.

My team and I was going to HQ but then we found out that it was destroyed. We have lost the war.

It’s been 8 years since the Templars won the war and the assassins have created a rebellion so we can stop them. This was very good but we had to find the door to the last piece of Eden, the key of Eden, but we had to use the Animus 3.0(a new design after the 2.0 was destroyed) to go to August 28, 1963, to the days of Cleveland and Franklin Knox, brother Assassins, to find the piece and save Martin Luther King Jr on the day he did his speech.

Franklin was stuck in the White House with a bunch of WTF which were a big thing during the time because they were the reasons why Blacks were segregated from Whites. I’m in the back of the White house and the first thing I find with my eagle vision is that there was a bomb. It was powered up by the key of Eden so that it can both destroy the half of Washington and finds the door of the Eden’s Light. Even if they do find the door, they would have killed themselves and they need the other pieces. So very quickly, I sneaked in the main room and defused the bombthen saved the President and other politicians who were with him and now I’m going after Franklin. As his elder brother, I couldn’t leave him to fend for his self (even if he was an assassin like me.)

I broke right through the door and found a problem. As well as Franklin was captured, I was made to do a decision. I get my brother and the WRF keep the piece of Eden or I take the piece of Eden and they kill my young sibling. I couldn’t let anything happen to my brother even if it meant the Eden’s key. So, I asked for my brother. After they untied my brother, I knew he would think I would have a plan (in which I did.) I yelled, “NOW!” Then we attacked the WRF and took the piece before they could do any thing.

While I was running with my brother, Martin Luther King came running with us saying that we had to protect the whole of America and the World as great Assassins and amazing freedom fighters against DATA. If this is true then that means that we will have a crisis in the future.

I knew it. The piece of Eden was in the coffin of Cleveland Knox’s grave. Both me and Alex ran to his grave but the future generations of the WRF was over there burning Cleveland’s body and stealing the key. We attacked with our new high-tech gadgets and weapons and fought against these fiends.

We brought back the key to a lab with all the pieces and then all the pieces collided together and a ghostly figure appeared wearing the pieces on him saying that we should lead him to the door to the Eden’s Light and that he was Eden, the first Assassin and the creator of the pieces of Eden.

We have just arrived to the White House with General Obama leading us to the door. Then the ghostly Assassin opened the door with the key and then a light shined out with a wave. We had word from mission control saying that all the Templars were disappearing from a mysterious wave of light. We have done it. The Templars a gone for good but then, when I turned around, I found my other brother, Tyler, putting Alex in a head-lock with a gun within his grasp and said,”Give me the light and you won’t be wasting your money on another funeral!” I couldn’t believe it. Tyler would sacrifice his own brother so he can have the light even though it wasn’t any use to him anyway. I tried to convince him but all he kept saying,”DATA! DATA needs the Eden’s Light!” We had no idea what hew was saying but then I remembered that General Desmond mentioned a story that when he was in his 20’s that he went into a cave with his dad and two other assassin mates saying that he had a vision that he met a digital woman called DATA and that Martin Luther King told Cleveland about some crisis coming soon. Is this her doing.

All of a sudden, Alex attacked Tyler by punching his crotch and then ran to me. He told me that there was something on Tyler’s neck and that maybe he was mind-controlled this whole time. I ran and made it look like an attack but when I got close, I karat chopped his neck and destroyed the transmitter. All of a sudden, Tyler felt like he had just woke up since the day he was born. Then he told us that the threat wasn’t over and that DATA was creating a digital army but we were ready. With our new arsenal and new ally, nothing was stopping us.

This is my life. This my story.

THE END



2 Comments

  1. You’ve got a strong idea here to base your story on Yonatan, we now need to follow the feedback below in order to improve your story and achieve the ‘Genre Writing’ badge.

    Targets:

    1) Try and focus on creating an image for the reader through use of description. Focus first on describing the setting of your story. Make sure that your reader can see the place the story is happening in their heads.

    2) You don’t need a prologue, just introduce your characters and build up their backstory through the hints that you drop about them through their actions and personalities.

    3) Try and create some tension by building up to dramatic moments through the tension techniques that we’ve discussed in class.

    I look forward to seeing how it turns out…

  2. Well done for responding to your feedback Yonatan and creating a more focused story.

    In order to achieve your Genre Writing badge, improve this draft based on the following targets:

    1) Can you build up to your main events in a bit more depth with some of the tension techniques we discussed in class?

    2) Make a real effort to avoid just saying that something happened. If you are listing events then the reader is immediately not going to be interested. Try and describe to them what is going on so they have an image of it in their head.

    I look forward to seeing the next draft.

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